Two poems with a fresh diction

Ayesha SalmanAyesha Salman is a sensitive writer. Like many new writers, she is searching for the right publisher. She is currently revising the manuscript of her first novel.

I am posting her two moving poems “Mother” and “Love”. Her poem Mother was earlier published in the Smoke magazine, UK. I like her imagery that is both stark and colourful. Both the poems have a haunting quality

Published in: on August 10, 2006 at 5:55 am  Comments (10)  

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  1. On August 10, 2006 at 4:59 pm Naveed said:

    Interesting. thanks. great blog..

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  2. On August 10, 2006 at 5:56 pm Raza Rumi said:

    Naveed, thanks…

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  3. On February 24, 2007 at 10:43 pm jessica said:

    i hate this poem…. it sucks i dont know what it means and i know that alot of us dont but work harder and maybe you will find or do better work k but you are pretty so there is a plus for you

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    • On May 4, 2010 at 6:21 pm Alishia said:

      Just because you didnt understand her beautiful poem does not mean it “sucks”, yes you can hate it, but dont insult her by following idiotic stereotypes and asuming ,in lack of a better fraise, you shit doesnt stink. If you don’t understand something, move on, don’t comment on it and make youself look like an idiot.

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  4. On March 20, 2007 at 1:00 pm asmahan said:

    Both poems are beautiful..a touching simplicity and sensitive exploration of meaning.I loved this oriental depth of feelling in approaching both topics:mother and love.I’m a poet myself and I felt and was moved by the tenderness of what you tried to express. Thank you

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  5. On April 19, 2007 at 12:02 am Danielle Joudieh said:

    Very VERY beautiful and well written poems. i loved LOVER more than mother but mother was still amazingly well written and worded. you seem like a EXTREMELY wonderful writer… you will go far. mah ehs alamie…

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  6. On April 21, 2007 at 3:36 pm SR said:

    “hate”, “sucks”? Just because you didn’t “understand” Ayesha’s work surely does not warrant a reaction as violent and extreme as yours Jessica. If I were you, I’d refrain from speaking on behalf of all the other readers.

    Please don’t blame your inabilitiy to understand something on another person’s efforts to express herself.

    Ayesha – I love your work – “always have”.

    Cheers!

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  7. On November 29, 2007 at 5:21 pm Jahane Rumi - In search of the unsearchable: “…O, my soul! where would you find your house?” » Water weight of this growing abyss said:

    […] weight of this growing abyss By RR A new poem by Ayesha Salman. The images are stark and the colours surreal. Please do comment so AS gets some feedback from the […]

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  8. On June 5, 2008 at 1:06 am Hamza said:

    I r form Pakistan lololoololol

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  9. On October 12, 2008 at 5:20 pm LOL said:

    i hate this poem…. it sucks i dont know what it means and i know that alot of us dont but work harder and maybe you will find or do better work k but you are pretty so there is a plus for you

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