Two poems with a fresh diction

Ayesha SalmanAyesha Salman is a sensitive writer. Like many new writers, she is searching for the right publisher. She is currently revising the manuscript of her first novel.

I am posting her two moving poems “Mother” and “Love”. Her poem Mother was earlier published in the Smoke magazine, UK. I like her imagery that is both stark and colourful. Both the poems have a haunting quality

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  1. On August 10, 2006 at 4:59 pm Naveed Said:

    Interesting. thanks. great blog..

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  2. On August 10, 2006 at 5:56 pm Raza Rumi Said:

    Naveed, thanks…

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  3. On February 24, 2007 at 10:43 pm jessica Said:

    i hate this poem…. it sucks i dont know what it means and i know that alot of us dont but work harder and maybe you will find or do better work k but you are pretty so there is a plus for you

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  4. On March 20, 2007 at 1:00 pm asmahan Said:

    Both poems are beautiful..a touching simplicity and sensitive exploration of meaning.I loved this oriental depth of feelling in approaching both topics:mother and love.I’m a poet myself and I felt and was moved by the tenderness of what you tried to express. Thank you

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  5. On April 19, 2007 at 12:02 am Danielle Joudieh Said:

    Very VERY beautiful and well written poems. i loved LOVER more than mother but mother was still amazingly well written and worded. you seem like a EXTREMELY wonderful writer… you will go far. mah ehs alamie…

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  6. On April 21, 2007 at 3:36 pm SR Said:

    “hate”, “sucks”? Just because you didn’t “understand” Ayesha’s work surely does not warrant a reaction as violent and extreme as yours Jessica. If I were you, I’d refrain from speaking on behalf of all the other readers.

    Please don’t blame your inabilitiy to understand something on another person’s efforts to express herself.

    Ayesha – I love your work – “always have”.

    Cheers!

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  7. On November 29, 2007 at 5:21 pm Jahane Rumi - In search of the unsearchable: “…O, my soul! where would you find your house?” » Water weight of this growing abyss Said:

    [...] weight of this growing abyss By RR A new poem by Ayesha Salman. The images are stark and the colours surreal. Please do comment so AS gets some feedback from the [...]

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  8. On June 5, 2008 at 1:06 am Hamza Said:

    I r form Pakistan lololoololol

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  9. On October 12, 2008 at 5:20 pm LOL Said:

    i hate this poem…. it sucks i dont know what it means and i know that alot of us dont but work harder and maybe you will find or do better work k but you are pretty so there is a plus for you

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